Reviewed HELP?

HI, I need some feedback on my newest videos it' my first videos that i edit in sony vegas I would really appreciate it. Thank you fore taking your time for helping me if you need some help from me just coment like im doing a lot of things on photoshop soooo if you need help with exampel banners im happy to help out

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I have taken a look at some video's and the edit itself is good but the quiet moments take the feel away. For example the moment you drive up a ramp and hit the gas tank with the John Cena quote, it is funny but the akward silence before the moment kills the mood.