Reviewed Need some constructive criticism on my latest Outlast videos

I recently uploaded some gameplay of Outlast and wanted to know how the quality of my commentary is. Thanks!

P.s Any way of making my videos more interesting?

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6GbK8RkNu2hWY2LHjdDV0w

Outlast Gameplay Part 1:

Outlast Gameplay Part 2:

 

ok here are some tips from my side (#jsutanopinion)

Try not to hide your accent, this is really nice. I for my part love (indian?) English, really nice x'3

Try to Shorten your intro. 8 seconds is very long and not really that good. try to find one with 4-5 seconds or just scrap the graphical intro and just do a Voice intro (like me, i do on every beginning the same catchphrase for the intro, giving it a bit more flexibility if something weird happens or so)

Try to contain a continuous flow of speech in your videos. Empty parts with no commentary are (for my part) slightly meh, it just feels not as good if you know what i mean.

Besides that your quality is good, sound is maybe a littlebit silent but thats not that much of a problem

 

Wow! I'm surprised you were able to make out that I'm Indian!

I'll shorten my intros and try to contain a continuous flow of speech in my videos. Though the latter will take some time to practice, but will try my best! Thanks for the feedback

 

well, if you hear as much english as i do (and im german btw x3) you can hear what accents is from what country :3 but im happy that i can help!

 

More in your about section will help. Add what your hobbies and such are. Make playlists as that will increase your views! It sounds like you've played Outlast before? Make what's happening more exciting!

 

Thanks for the feedback! I will go and change my about section right away.

There's one thing that has been bugging me... My videos aren't getting much views . How do I rank my videos higher in the search?
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Woops, that reply was meant for AtomFe Gaming. Soz

 

No problem man!

 

good videos, keep it up man

 

Thank you man